Added muffled music to intro scene, started tidying up/finishing dialogue

RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scenes/IntroScene.unity

@@ -1493,7 +1493,7 @@ MonoBehaviour:
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   m_Name: 
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-  pauseMenu: {fileID: 1586100788}
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@@ -1728,8 +1728,18 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   m_Name: 
   m_EditorClassIdentifier: 
   songs:
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@@ -29543,11 +29553,6 @@ SpriteRenderer:
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RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/JohnSmithSpeech.cs

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
 
         if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 1) {
             currentResponses = new string[] { "Hi there"};
-            return "Hello, im John Smith";
+            return "Hello, I'm John Smith";
 
         } else if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 2) {
             currentResponses = new string[] { "Thanks, How's it going John Smith?", "Thanks clown man", "It was a terrible time funny man" };

RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/PaperSpeech.cs

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         loadConversation();
 
         currentResponses = new string[] {"Read"};
-        return "You encounter a well drawn piece of paper on the ground. You can use the number keys to interact";
+        return "You encounter a well-drawn piece of paper on the ground. You can use the number keys to interact";
     }
 
     public string GoodbyeMessage()
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     {
         currentResponses = new string[] { };
 
-            return "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
+            return "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
                          " YOUR CIRCUS CAREER";
     }
 
@@ -89,10 +89,10 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         //GameManager.speechState will be the size of the queue when this dequeued
         //make sure to change the check integer in CharacterInteractins when changing dialogue
         conversation.Enqueue("The words on the page speak to you: CIRQUE DU SOLAME NOW HIRING, NO EXPERIENCE NECCESSARY");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's better than Macdonalds."});
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's better than McDonald's."});
 
         conversation.Enqueue("BE THE PERFORMER YOUR PARENTS ALWAYS HOPED YOU WOULDN'T ");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "This is tearible", "I just wanna perform", "Actually it's what they always wanted" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "This is tearible", "I just wanna perform", "Actually, it's what they always wanted" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
                              " YOUR CIRCUS CAREER");

RingMaster/RingMaster/ProjectSettings/ProjectVersion.txt

-m_EditorVersion: 2018.2.11f1
+m_EditorVersion: 2018.2.12f1