Merge branch 'piethrowing'

* piethrowing:
  Tidied up Ahava's dialogue
  Finished dialogue
  Added muffled music to intro scene, started tidying up/finishing dialogue

# Conflicts:
#	RingMaster/RingMaster/.vs/RingMaster/xs/UserPrefs.xml
#	RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/SilasSpeech.cs

RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scenes/IntroScene.unity

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@@ -1728,8 +1728,18 @@ MonoBehaviour:
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RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/AhavaSpeech.cs

@@ -23,20 +23,20 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         loadConversation();
 
         if (GameManager.ConversationStage == 1) {
-            currentResponses = new string[] { "Spur of the moment", "i feel like someone is controlling me", "I was told by a magical piece of paper" };
-            return "Hello? I wasnt expecting any new performers today.";
+            currentResponses = new string[] { "Spur of the moment", "I feel like someone is controlling me", "I was told by a magical piece of paper" };
+            return "Hello? I wasn't expecting any new performers today.";
 
         } else if (GameManager.ConversationStage == 2) {
             currentResponses = new string[] { "Thanks", "It was nothing", "I could have done better!" };
-            return "well done on your performances!";
+            return "Well done on your performances!";
 
         } else if (GameManager.ConversationStage == 3) {
             currentResponses = new string[] { "I wouldn't say that", "That's me", "Understatement much?" };
-            return "Hey there hotshot";
+            return "Hey there, hotshot";
 
         } else if (GameManager.ConversationStage == 4) {
-            currentResponses = new string[] { "Give her one of Simon's patented bear hugs", "What's the matter?", "try not to notice"};
-            return "*Ahava seems to be crying*";
+            currentResponses = new string[] { "Give her one of Simon's patented bear hugs", "What's the matter?", "Try not to notice"};
+            return "*Seems to be crying*";
 
         }
         return "Something has gone terribly wrong: The stage is: " + GameManager.ConversationStage;
@@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     }
     public string butthurtGoodbye(){
         currentResponses = new string[] {};
-        return "Didnt want to admire my glorious beard?";
+        return "Didn't want to admire my glorious beard?";
     }
 
     public string nothingMoreToSay() {
         currentResponses = new string[] {"...", "....", "....." };
         if (Random.Range(0, 1f) < 0.5) {
-            return "my beard grows tired of your chitter chatter";
+            return "My beard grows tired of your chitter chatter";
         } else {
             return "Dennnnnis the mennnnnis!";
         }
@@ -107,13 +107,13 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         //GameManager.speechState will be the size of the queue when this dequeued
         //make sure to change the check integer in CharacterInteractins when changing dialogue
         conversation.Enqueue("Since you're now one of us, what shall your stage name be?");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] {"Thats me!"});
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] {"That's me!"});
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("How about we call you John Smith instead");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I Love it!", "I Hate it!", "I know a guy called John Smith" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("How about we call you John Smith instead?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I love it!", "I hate it!", "I know a guy called John Smith" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("You can call me Baird... Ahava Baird, And i shall call you Dennnis");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "fine", "not Dennnis!","Did you mean Dennis?" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You can call me Baird... Ahava Baird, And I shall call you Dennnis");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Fine", "Not Dennnis!","Did you mean Dennis?" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Dennnnis it is!");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "..." });
@@ -121,23 +121,23 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     }
 
     private void conversationStage2() {
-        conversation.Enqueue("You're fitting in nicely here " + GameManager.playerName + ", you remind me of Myself when i was younger");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "great", "you were young once?", "thanks mum" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You're fitting in nicely here " + GameManager.playerName + ", you remind me of myself when I was younger");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Great", "You were young once?", "Thanks, mum" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Back in my day, I was the talk of the circus, people came from miles around to see the luscious Baird");
+        conversation.Enqueue("Back in my day, I was the talk of the circus: people came from miles around to see the luscious Baird");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's still pretty luscious", "What's a mile?", "It's just hair on your face..." });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("If you keep up the good work maybe you can become half as good as me *wink*");
+        conversation.Enqueue("If you keep up the good work maybe you can become half as good as me *winks*");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Wow, you think so?!", "Are you hitting on me?", "I think I'm gonna have to talk to my union rep" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Of course, you'd need someone great to help you get there");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You seem pretty great *smile*", "Maybe Simon can help me?", "I'll be fine by myself" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You seem pretty great *smiles*", "Maybe Simon can help me?", "I'll be fine by myself" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("You are growing on me, so maybe if you do some more performances I'll consider taking you under my beard");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I hope I can be as good as you!", "That sounds unhygenic", "I think I'd prefer Simon" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("You'd better get in there then!");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Yes mam!", "maybe...", "Yes sir!" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You'd better get in there, then!");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Yes, ma'am!", "Maybe...", "Yes, sir!" });
 
 
     }
@@ -147,14 +147,14 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         conversation.Enqueue("Don't you think you're getting a bit ahead of yourself?");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What do you mean?", "The show must go on", "The show must go on, with me to lead it." });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("You just wouldn't want to wear out the crowd, is all, might be too much for them.");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "But they love it", "I don't see why I should stop", "Don't tell me what to do Dad!" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You just wouldn't want to wear out the crowd, is all: might be too much for them.");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "But they love it", "I don't see why I should stop", "Don't tell me what to do, dad!" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("I'm just saying, the crowd can only handle so much pizzazz, and I already put out more than enough.");
+        conversation.Enqueue("I'm just saying the crowd can only handle so much pizzazz and I already put out more than enough.");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "But everyone loves pizza?", "What's a pizzazz?", "Maybe it's time for you to get out the razor" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Be careful Dennnnnis, you're messing with the wrong bearded lady... also the only... bearded lady, people trust in the Baird, Baird is the word");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I just wanna be friends", "I'm still confused", "*Give her the bird*, the bird is the word" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I just wanna be friends", "I'm still confused", "*Give her the bird* The bird is the word" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("HMMPPPHH");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "=(", "*Back away slowly*", "Sing 'Let it go'" });
@@ -164,19 +164,19 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     private void conversationStage4()
     {
         conversation.Enqueue("Oh, it's you *wipes tears with beard*");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What's wrong?", "would you prefer a tissue?", "What are you crying for?" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What's wrong?", "Would you prefer a tissue?", "What are you crying for?" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Why do you care? Congratulations on becoming the best performer I guess");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "its a Baird shave beard world out there", "I don't hate you, we're friends", "Thanks" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("Why do you care? Congratulations on becoming the best performer, I guess");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's a Baird shave beard world out there", "I don't hate you, we're friends", "Thanks" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("It's just, people used to come for miles to see my beard, and now its like they don't see me");
+        conversation.Enqueue("It's just... people used to come for miles to see my beard, and now its like they don't see me");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I think you're great!", "People still like you", "What's a mile?" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("You're joking like John does, I can tell, I mean, I've never even actually performed");
+        conversation.Enqueue("You're joking like John does, I can tell. I mean, I've never even actually performed");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Well.. we only had three weeks", "But you hold the circus together", "So you just stand here all day?" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("The only time I moved from this spot was when you first arrived, I don't even have a walk animation");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "That's weird, I can't seem to stop moving", "at least you're not stuck unicycling", "You're like a beardtastic statue" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "That's weird, I can't seem to stop moving", "At least you're not stuck unicycling", "You're like a beardtastic statue" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Can I tell you a secret?");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "yes", "yes", "YES but in capitals" });
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ public class AhavaSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I'm sure you're still beautiful without it", "Is that what that bald patch is?", "I don't like where this is going" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Here, take this, it's dangerous to go alone");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "...", "this is the end?", "this really isn't necessary" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "...", "This is the end?", "This really isn't necessary" });
 
 
     }

RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/JohnSmithSpeech.cs

@@ -24,10 +24,10 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
 
         if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 1) {
             currentResponses = new string[] { "Hi there"};
-            return "Hello, im John Smith";
+            return "Hello, I'm John Smith";
 
         } else if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 2) {
-            currentResponses = new string[] { "Thanks, How's it going John Smith?", "Thanks clown man", "It was a terrible time funny man" };
+            currentResponses = new string[] { "Thanks. How's it going, John Smith?", "Thanks, clown man", "It was a terrible time, funny man" };
             return "Nice job on the trapeze";
 
         } else if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 3) {
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
             return "Hey, can I ask you a question?";
 
         } else if ((int)GameManager.getLevel(getName()) == 4) {
-            currentResponses = new string[] { "stage 4 greeting response" };
-            return "stage 4 (hello) grr";
+            currentResponses = new string[] { "Hello!", "What's up?", "Here we go again" };
+            return "Hi...";
         }
         return "Something has gone terribly wrong: The stage is: " + GameManager.ConversationStage;
     }
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     public string nothingMoreToSay() {
         currentResponses = new string[] { };
         if (Random.Range(0, 1f) < 0.8) {
-            return "hey";
+            return "Hey";
         } else {
             return "So nice of you to stay, but I'm not that exciting";
         }
@@ -105,16 +105,16 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         conversation.Enqueue("So nice of you to SWING BY");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("To Swing yourself just hold A to swing left and D to swing right");
+        conversation.Enqueue("To swing yourself just hold A to swing left and D to swing right");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Well Done! Ill give you a bit more power");
+        conversation.Enqueue("Well Done! I'll give you a bit more power");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Cool! Now press SPACEABR to let go and Fly!");
+        conversation.Enqueue("Cool! Now press SPACEABR to let go and fly!");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Dont worry Simon will catch you! Use A and D to rotate in the air");
+        conversation.Enqueue("Don't worry, Simon will catch you! Use A and D to rotate in the air");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Nice Job! Try and manoeuvre yourself across these platforms");
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         conversation.Enqueue("Good one! PIES give you points and boost your time!");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Im so proud of you! youll be the best Trapezeist ever!");
+        conversation.Enqueue("I'm so proud of you! You'll be the best trapezeist ever!");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Continue" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("Feel free to keep playing here or you could give it a go for real now!");
@@ -136,62 +136,101 @@ public class JohnSmithSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
 
     private void conversationStage1() {
         if (GameManager.HasTalkedToAhava) {
-            conversation.Enqueue("welcome to the circus.");
+            conversation.Enqueue("Welcome to the circus.");
             responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Thanks", "It's an interesting place", "What do you do?"});
 
-            conversation.Enqueue("if you ever wanna try a really unique performance you should try the trapezing, Ahava let's me take care of that.");
+            conversation.Enqueue("If you ever wanna try a really unique performance you should try the trapezing, Ahava lets me take care of that.");
             responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I already have", "I'll give it a go", "Sorry, I don't swing that way" });
 
-            conversation.Enqueue("I mean if you don't want to its fine I guess, I'm John Smith by the way.");
+            conversation.Enqueue("I mean if you don't want to it's fine, I guess. I'm John Smith, by the way.");
             responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "My name is Dennnnnis", "My name is " + GameManager.playerName, "I'm sure I can find time" });
 
             conversation.Enqueue("It's nice to meet a new face here, maybe you'll be different from the rest.");
-            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What do you mean?", "different?", "It's nice to meet you to" });
+            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What do you mean?", "Different?", "It's nice to meet you too" });
 
             conversation.Enqueue("Not that I mean anything by that of course, just nice to have a few more ummmm... clowns around here.");
-            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You do seem a few short of a car", "Surely as long as you all get on well?", "something about you seems funny" });
+            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You do seem a few short of a car", "Surely as long as you all get on well?", "Something about you seems funny" });
 
-            conversation.Enqueue("you're not wrong, I should probably head back into the tent shortly. See you around");
-            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "See you in there", "cya", "*just back away*" });
+            conversation.Enqueue("You're not wrong, I should probably head back into the tent shortly. See you around");
+            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "See you in there", "cya", "*Just backs away*" });
         } else {
-            conversation.Enqueue("talk to the bearded lady before you start clowning around");
-            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "okay", "that was a terrible joke", "*back away*" });
+            conversation.Enqueue("Talk to the bearded lady before you start clowning around");
+            responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Okay", "That was a terrible joke", "*Backs away*" });
         }
     }
 
     private void conversationStage2() {
-        conversation.Enqueue("Just remember to keep practicing, wouldn't want someone with a name like yours to waste their talent");
+        conversation.Enqueue("Just remember to keep practising, wouldn't want someone with a name like yours to waste their talent");
         responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I will", "What does that have to do with it?", "My name is pretty lame" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("say, do you wanna hear a joke?");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "wouldn't miss it", "yes", "no" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("Say, do you wanna hear a joke?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Wouldn't miss it", "Yes", "No" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("you'll love it");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I'm waiting", "hurry up", "please no" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You'll love it");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I'm waiting", "Hurry up", "Please, no" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("an accountant asks a trapeze artist what is their net worth. The trapeze artist says 'Every penny'");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I wish I had a penny for every time I heard a joke that bad", "*chuckle slightly*", "that was terrible" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("An accountant asks a trapeze artist what is their net worth. The trapeze artist says 'Every penny'");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I wish I had a penny for every time I heard a joke that bad", "*Chuckles slightly*", "That was terrible" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAHHAHAHHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA/n" + " you feel like he took your rejection well");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I wish I had a penny for every time I heard a joke that bad", "*chuckle slightly*", "that was terrible" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAHHAHAHHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA/n" + " You feel like he took your rejection well");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I wish I had a penny for every time I heard a joke that bad", "*Chuckles slightly*", "That was terrible" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("*John struggles to catch his breath* it's cool having you around kid, maybe I'll tell that one to the others. Looking forward to seeing you in the tent");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Can't wait", "looking forward to flying again, cya", "feign interest" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("*Struggles to catch his breath* It's cool having you around, kid. Maybe I'll tell that one to the others. Looking forward to seeing you in the tent");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Can't wait", "Looking forward to flying again, cya", "*Feigns interest*" });
     }
 
     private void conversationStage3() {
-        conversation.Enqueue("Stage 3 conversation stuff");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Stage 3 response 1", "stage 3 resposne 2" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("What do you think of trapezing?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What do you mean?", "Uhh...", "Well..." });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Stage 3 conversation stuff 2");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Stage 3 response 1", "stage 3 resposne 2" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("Like...do you think it's fun?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Absolutely! It's the best part of the circus", "It's pretty good", "It's okay, I guess" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Glad to hear it! I just worry that people don't like it: it's not as showy as Simon's stuff and doesn't have Silas' catchy tunes");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Who needs that other stuff?", "Throwing pies is kinda cathartic...", "To be honest, I like getting my dance on" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("There's something so much more...primal and natural about trapezing, don't you think?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I'm not sure...", "Huh?", "What?" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("It's like we're monkies again! Swinging from branch to branch, tree to tree");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Oh! That's true!", "I'd rather keep my feet on the ground", "I'm not into 'primal'" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Maybe it would be better if we were monkies again, no talking about people behind their backs...");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You might have a point there", "Are you implying something?", "I'd miss my creature comforts" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Anyway, I should probably get to rigging the platforms up for tonight");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Catch you later!", "Okay, bye", "At least there were no jokes this time" });
     }
 
     private void conversationStage4() {
-        conversation.Enqueue("Stage 4 conversation stuff");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Stage 4 response 1", "stage 4 resposne 2" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("What do you think of me?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "What do you mean?", "Uhh...", "Well..." });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Like...am I funny? Am I special?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Umm...", "Err...", "Well..." });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Some people think I'm 'just another clown'. A lot of people...most people...");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I wouldn't say that", "*Stares awkwardly*", "But you ARE just another clown" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Apparently old John Smith is...generic *sniffs*");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Not in the slightest!", "You're a trapezist! That's not generic at all!", "John Smith is a pretty generic name..." });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("I just want to entertain the people with amazing feats of trapeze! *sobs*");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You already do that!", "I'm amazed, at least!", "You've taught me so much!" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("*Wipes eyes* You really mean that?");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "I don't say things I don't mean", "Of course! You're great!", "Sure! *crosses fingers*" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("I thought...for a moment...that I might hang up my trapezing boots");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Don't even think about it!", "You're the best trapezist I've ever seen!", "I mean, if you're getting old..." });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("No, I couldn't do that: trapezing is my life! It's what I live for!");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "That's what I like to hear!", "Keep on swinging, John!", "Living's pretty cool, I hear" });
+
+        conversation.Enqueue("Thank you... What you've said means a lot: no one else has been so kind to me before");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "You deserve better!", "A friend in need, you know?", "If I'm kind, what kind of jerks do you know?" });
 
-        conversation.Enqueue("Stage 4 conversation stuff 2");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Stage 4 response 1", "stage 4 resposne 2" });
+        conversation.Enqueue("You'll always be welcome to come trapezing with me, friend. I'll see you later!");
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "Take care up there!", "It's always a pleasure!", "Yeah, sure, bye!" });
     }
 }

RingMaster/RingMaster/Assets/Scripts/DaytimeScripts/CharacterSpeech/PaperSpeech.cs

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         loadConversation();
 
         currentResponses = new string[] {"Read"};
-        return "You encounter a well drawn piece of paper on the ground. You can use the number keys to interact";
+        return "You encounter a well-drawn piece of paper on the ground. You can use the number keys to interact";
     }
 
     public string GoodbyeMessage()
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
     {
         currentResponses = new string[] { };
 
-            return "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
+            return "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
                          " YOUR CIRCUS CAREER";
     }
 
@@ -89,10 +89,10 @@ public class PaperSpeech : MonoBehaviour, Character {
         //GameManager.speechState will be the size of the queue when this dequeued
         //make sure to change the check integer in CharacterInteractins when changing dialogue
         conversation.Enqueue("The words on the page speak to you: CIRQUE DU SOLAME NOW HIRING, NO EXPERIENCE NECCESSARY");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's better than Macdonalds."});
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "It's better than McDonald's."});
 
         conversation.Enqueue("BE THE PERFORMER YOUR PARENTS ALWAYS HOPED YOU WOULDN'T ");
-        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "This is tearible", "I just wanna perform", "Actually it's what they always wanted" });
+        responseQueue.Enqueue(new string[] { "This is tearible", "I just wanna perform", "Actually, it's what they always wanted" });
 
         conversation.Enqueue("WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, JUST WALK TO THE RIGHT TO LEAVE THE CONVERSATION AND START " +
                              " YOUR CIRCUS CAREER");